In Te Ngahere we have been writing a descriptive piece of writing called a moment in time.

The story is set in the Te Ngahere the bush.

This is only my draft so I still need to work on my feedback.

 I need to work on putting my writing in paragraphs.

I think I did well at describing the Te Ngahere.

Hopefully you enjoy my writing.

Moment in time

The bright sky and shiny sun with bushes and bushes trees and trees.

The beautiful green bed uphill down hill. With shiny water smooth and calm. Trees as green as the grass. The  trees calmly swaying side to side. Birds humming to the sound of the water. Bees collecting their honey. The sound of bees humming with the birds it was the best bush walk. I felt the grass tickling my feet. The mud sticking to the grass like glue.  The daisies blooming in the corner of my eye. The water as clear as the sea. The smell of daisies blooming. The lefs flying across the forest. The smell of dry bark  throughout the whole forest. Sprinting thru the soft forest. Sitting on the flower bed. Breathing fresh air in and out. The sight of a lily pond nearby frogs tadpoles. Cute birds bright sky what a lovely day for a bush walk. Butterflies sewing gracefully above the waving trees.

The sound of tui , kereru and more wild life. Bush waving , flowers blooming , water calm like the grass , mud as sticky as glue , peaceful quite the sunniest bush walk I have ever been to. Nest  above looking like it is on a tightrope about to fall then the wind stops the nest calmly stops and sound and safe.