Waitangi recount

In Te Maunga we were learning to write a recount about our trip  to the waitangi treaty grounds and what we did. I think I did well at using a  hook to make the reader more interested in my writing. I think I need to work on saying how long took and when we walked to waitangi. Anyway here is my writing

Maui Matau Te whanganui

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On Tuesday the whole of paihia school went to the Waitangi treaty grounds Then I a had a feeling we were going to have the longest walk ever . The very first thing we did was lining up in are lines on the court ready to leave to the Waitangi treaty grounds whaea Becks yelled get into your lines. Then  we were ready to take off to the Waitangi treaty grounds.  We all started sprinting so we would get there even  faster.  Then within  one minute of sprinting we were at the treaty grounds we saw all of Nga Motu walking out of the treaty grounds with these flacks kites they were awesome they slowly drifting in the air when they were holding on to the kites.After that we  all walk to a white tent  in the middle of the treaty grounds we Talked the three activities we were going to be doing at the treaty grounds.  So then I  stayed here and got into groups started Weaving with Anyah under and over again and then my side of Weaving was done so tied my top of my Weaving  in a ponytail. Then I  helped Anyah Weave  her side so then we went under over under over then we got told to the top as soon we're half  way then we all Ran out of the tent for the next game . Then we all got up in and took two steps back then we talked about the game kuti so two people are blind folded with kuti in their hands then the first one to touch each other win and someone else has ago  then it Anyah and  Ezra then Anyah shacked the shell twice Ezra came closer then …. Anayah smacked him It was funny. Then after  all 3 games  we got called  to play the game maui  matau  Te whanganui. Then we all stand up in between the two lines  so if she said  maui we would go left  if she said matau we would right and lastly  Te whanganui we would go in the  middle of the lines. if you  mucked up you would sit down. So the first thing she called out  was maui we jumped left then she said maui  again we stayed still then matau we all jumped right and she lastly said Te whanganui then we sat down. Then we  went to do some  planting in the bush we learnt about all different plants then Bella was my buddy to do some planting then small plant and little black shovel then whole to dig safely put the plant in its whole and watered our plant .