Persuasive writing

In Te Maunga we have been learning how to write  a persuasive argument. I think I did well at  saying why Chromebooks can help us in our learning. I think I could work on say my argument better with describing words. here is my writing⇓⇓⇓

I believe  that Chromebooks are a good way of  Kids & adults  and schools learning.

Firstly if  our teacher is teaching others we could look at the time table and do what we are doing next that is great so we  don’t interrupt the teacher when she is teaching others.

It  Can help us so when the teacher is busy we can go do something else.

Secondly  Chromebooks also help us so if we are sick we can email the teacher and say what we are doing.

Thirdly chromebooks I agree we should have chromebooks  help us when  we need to do research about a country or an object you need to learn more about so you understand it.

Finally When you're sick I can just ask my teacher what we are doing today. Then I could finish some work that I need to do because everything is on are site and in our google drive.

So here is my last Conclusion I agree we should have chromebooks when  we learn. And I also  believe  that chromebooks are a good way of  Kid & adults  and schools learning.And I hope you agree with my point and let your school  be great and have chromebooks involved in your school!!