Metaphor poem

In Te ngahere  we have been using metaphors in our writing. I think I did well at describing myself in my poem. Next time I think I could work on adding a little bit more metaphors in my poem so it is more interesting. Here is my draft.

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Tayla is a pair of nikes shiny and stylish   

Tayla is a dolphin speeding in the ocean

Tayla is a Ferrari slick and sharp

My Pepeha

In the last few weeks Te Ngahere have been learning our pepeha. We had to add a few extra things to our pepeha. I think I did well at  Introducing my family and everything else in my pepeha.

Next time I think that I should add capitals in the right places. I also enjoyed learning more about my family. Hopefully you enjoy my pepeha.